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Aquaman: King of Atlantis (Planned Project)

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Aquaman was a film that a lot of people seemed to have enjoyed. For me, I honestly found it to be a pretty dull experience. The biggest problem for me is probably the script. It doesn’t feel like anything new I’ve seen before and I didn’t really care all that much for the characters. It’s a real shame, because I think James Wan is a very solid filmmaker and did a solid job directing.

My edit attempts to do the best it can to hopefully make the film a bit more interesting to watch. While there isn’t as much stuff that can be done, due to its structure and no deleted scenes released, I feel that this is the best that can be done.

Color corrected the entire film.

Re-scored the entire film, removing all songs as well. I’ve been considering using work from James Horner.

Removed the majority of the text cards for each location.

Removed the intro narration from Arthur.

Trimmed Atlanna and Thomas Curry blowing on their tea.

Removed the Atlantian soldiers ordering Atlanna to return to Atlantis.

Removed Atlanna’s, “Tom! My weapon!”

Removed the discussion between Atlanna and Thomas about tears.

Muted some of the bullies’ dialogue as they harass Arthur.

Removed the story about the knife David Kane is given.

Muted the pirate telling Kane that a man hit the submarine.

Removed Kane’s, “That’s not a man.”

Muted Arthur’s, “Up!”

Muted Arthur’s lines as he walks away from the Kanes.

Removed the subtitle that the ballast has been ruptured.

Trimmed away Kane’s father telling him to live so he can kill Aquaman.

Trimmed some of the last words between Kane and his father.

Removed the bikers taking selfies with Arthur.

Removed King Orm’s history lesson about the meeting place.

The explosion during the meeting has been brought sooner for better pacing.

Cut Vulko’s, “To arms!”

Trimmed Arthur and Mera’s conversation.

Moved the scene of Kane getting paid gold after the submarine attack, trimming away some of Kane’s lines.

Trimmed Dr. Shin’s rant on the news to remove the question of the existence of Atlanteans.

Removed the flashback of Vulko teaching Arthur a swimming lesson.

Trimmed the humor when Mera first shows Arthur her ship.

Trimmed away Vulko saying, “It gave us the ability to breathe underwater.”

Removed Orm’s line, “I can’t believe you’re finally here. I’ve heard so many stories about you.”

Trimmed the bad acting from teenage Arthur.

Removed some of the slow motion moments during Arthur and Orm’s fight.

Cut Orm throwing up water in the air pocket.

Removed a comedic bit between Arthur and Mera as they’re being chased.

Removed Orm flying beside Arthur and Mera on their escape.

Removed Mera dismissing Arthur while inside of the whale.

Trimmed away Arthur and Mera bickering on who saved who.

Removed the shots of Arthur and Mera walking out of the ocean, as the film cuts to the plane flying over the Sahara desert.

Tightened Arthur and Mera’s discussion on the plane, trimming away Mera’s heartache line.

Trimmed away King Nereus describing Mera as “the Princess of Xebel.”

Removed Kane’s line, “Killing him is my reward.”

Trimmed the shots of Kane using the gun and removing Orm’s lines about it.

Removed Arthur’s lines as they enter the boundary.

Trimmed away the joke of Arthur saying he could’ve peed on the recording.

Trimmed away Mera testing Arthur’s memorization.

Removed the emphasis on Mera holding Arthur’s hand, along with his lines when looking at the map inside the bottle.

Removed Arthur and Mera eating roses.

Slightly moved up the explosion in Italy to reduce Arthur and Mera’s loving gaze.

Removed Black Manta’s monologue as he arrives in Italy.

Removed Black Manta’s, “That’s right!”

Removed Black Manta announcing his name to Arthur.

Removed Arthur and Black Manga’s lines between each other inside of the house.

Removed Black Manta’s lines, “You can’t run! You owe me blood!”

Removed the joke with Murk and the toliet.

Removed Mera and Atlanna telling Arthur he needs to be a hero.

Removed a brief flashback of Arthur communicating with the shark in the aquarium.

Trimmed away the reactions from others during Karathen to focus on the Atlanteans.

Removed Arthur and Mera’s kiss.

Removed the slow-motion after Orm lands on the surface of the ship.

Removed Mera’s final speech.

Removed Arthur’s final narration and the final shot of him.

Added a fan edit credit and name of the new composer to the end credits.

The name’s Lawson. Noah Lawson.