An updated version of this edit is now available. Version 2 has the following:

Added a little more contrast and a slight purple tint to the TLJ footage in order to balance the slight blue tint from the previous version.
Vader’s breathing and Snoke’s voice when Luke searches through Ben’s mind is included. This is meant to connect with Palpatine’s “I have been every voice you have ever heard inside your head” line which has been added back in.
Removed Kylo turning around and yelling after Luke cancels his force projection.
Removed the shot of the sun intercutting the shot of Luke looking out in the distance and inserted another shot of the sun afterwards that was previously removed.
Moved Rey and Leia’s reactions to after Luke dies.

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