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Post #1497480

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Peter Pan
Parent topic
Community Focus Thread 1: The Phantom Menace
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Date created
31-Jul-2022, 10:30 AM

Maybe like this:

Crisis on Naboo! Mounting tension between her people and her he tribal Gungan pushed QUEEN AMIDALA, sovereign of the Naboo, to plead the Galactic Senate to intevene.

Hindered by war profiteers and those that see instability as an opportunity alike, chancellor Valorum secretly dispatched two Jedi, chivalrous warriors and ancient scholars of the force, to aid her in his stead.

As the TRADE FEDERATION readily gears their supply with war machinery, Jedi Master Qui-Gon Jinn and his apprentice Obi-Wan Kenobi sped to the evergreen planet of Naboo to negotiate the tides and settle the conflict…

It mentions the Trade federation by name and hopefully indicates what will happen without being to concrete.