This is a fantastic project. I have been following the thread for a while, and I finally had some time to check out an episode. I skipped straight to your episode that focuses on the Mandalore Corruption Arc, as it is one that I absolutely despise in the show. I had my doubts about how these episodes could be fixed, but I was pleasantly surprised by the product you finished.
I am glad that you take the time to outline your goals and ideas on this project, as I can say that I agree with them all. Clone Wars is in such an uncanny position in the Star Wars mythos, as it is simultaneously some of the most high quality and important Star Wars content while also being designed to be a cartoon aimed mainly at a young demographic. Your edit really helps guide the shows tone and not stray into the elements that feel too “cartoony”, while keeping everything that made the show special.
I really do hope you see this project through to Rebels as well, as I think that show could benefit from an edit like this even more.
I’d be glad to lend more detailed feedback as I continue to follow this!