-Bail convincing Obi-wan. It should be trimmed even more. Obi-wan wouldnt hesitate So much. Maybe the “Phone call” could be cut? Obi-wan shouldnt even be able to contact Bail So easily in the first place. Anyway, we dont need to See him how he enters the spaceship, we can cut directly to him landing On Daimyu.
-The cameo of Temeura should be reinserted 😭
-btw, not necesary for the story, but would be nice to See how Leia disses her cousin.
So I’m messing with this section of the movie right now. I personally like that Kenobi is so hesitant. He’s been packing meat for 10 years, not used the force, not been in a fight. He’s depressed and feels useless. It would absolutely take a lot to get him back in the game.
I am thinking of removing the big epic “going on the ship” moment because it feels needlessly epic. It works as the ending of the first episode, but I also feel like the buried lightsabers scene basically accomplishes the same thing.
I am starting to lean toward adding the clone trooper back in, just for world building.