I’m trying to make the escape from Jabim flow better, so I’ve got a little test clip here that I’d love some opinions on.

Basically, the scene needs to hit all the emotional/story beats while avoiding that “something’s missing” feeling due to all the Reva stuff I cut out. This sequence also takes way too long in the show. It works for the show as it’s the intro to an episode, but as a sort of tranistion/breaking point in the final part of a film, it can’t go on too long. So this gets us from leaving Jabim to Obi-Wan luring away Vader in 4 minutes.

There’s a section where I’ll need to rebuild the sound effects of the star destroyer firing at the ship. I did a little just as a placeholder, but if the idea seems to be working I’ll do much more detail on that.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1bt7XB2vTq7ftZuDNFw-FH3crpFy2UuSZ/view?usp=sharing