Anjohan

Excited to see V2. I know it’s a pain, but hard to let something go until it’s finished. Been there.

You can see Tala in the elevator when they are escaping, can you mask her out? She doesn’t come out of the elevator.
I still am pushing for removing “Have you come to kill me?” line. I love the “I will do what I must” from Obiwan, but why would Vader say that when he was chasing Obi?
Have you thought about an ending that doesn’t have Lars or Luke? Without the Reva scenes (which didn’t make sense anyways), this makes less sense. It also feels more canon for them not to connect based on “he’s a crazy old wizard” line from ANH.
To the rescue, I would remove the elevator on the front half (since he goes into water) and put in the back half when they actually ride up the elevator.