Watched the first version last night and it looks pretty good, works very well overall.
Seems my narrative hangups have all been called out already and being worked on. The one thing I will mention is just to double check the levels on the added music, some sounded a little loud (but not by a lot). I also think you need a bit more SFX in the rescored scene with Vader on the Star Destroyer and he walks down the bridge and says “Increase fire power” (specifically some ambiance, and footsteps). Let me know if you need help sourcing some sounds for that I might be able to help.