I like GLogus review and agree to most of his points. I have a couple more to add to his list:

In the very end, Obi-Wan meets Luke and there is an abrupt change in the music as the scene changes to Obi-Wan in the desert.
Just before the scene where Leia falls and Obi-Wan uses the force to hold her in the air, it’s a bit unnatural to me that Leia started running like mad. In the original she is not convinced Obi-Wan is a real jedi, whereas in the edit he already used his lightsaber and all that. Perhaps there is a way of sneaking one of the shooting scenes in the start to make it look like Leia is running from the line of fire? (Do we have any audio of Obi-Wan telling Leia to run? Perhaps that would do the trick.)
In the same scene, it looks like Obi-Wan is telling Leia to go somewhere, perhaps even jump? Then she jumps and Obi-Wan changes attitude immediately and goes “oh no, she jumped” or something to that effect. That also didn’t feel natural. I’m not sure if that can be easily fixed.

Otherwise, this is my go-to media for Obi-Wan from now on. Thanks a lot Anjohan! Good job!