ADM: Nice to see someone is already hard at work on this, and I like the general concept of the scene. However, as I'm sure you realize, some of it seems a little TOO cut-and-paste. That's the big challenge for anyone attempting this though. My favorite part would be, "Do you feel responsible? Finding him was the will of the Force. I have no doubt of that." I've always thought we needed some sort of reaction or admission of responsibility from Qui-Gon in regards to Anakin. That isn't what you've done but with a bit more editing the lines you've found could work nicely. I really can't judge this until seeing it, but you're certainly headed in the right direction.