I’ll have more feedback later but maybe more prominent footsteps could be added as they are walking to the saloon. I like the idea of keeping them mysterious, building up their reveal through the reactions of the crowd. And we can hear the heavy footsteps halt in the shot before the Grand Inquisitor reveal. I do think the transition between those two shots feels a little noticeable, but maybe that would help.

Is the transition from Reva “killing” the Jedi and then seeing his feet strung up the same as the last version? The transition felt a little quicker than I recall it being. But yeah good job on not showing a close look at his face!

Might want to get more feedback on the new establishing shot you chose for Obi’s meditation scene, but I think something like that shot could work well.

I’ll give more feedback later when I have more time, but it is looking good!