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Post #1492012

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RogueLeader
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The Clone Wars: Refocused [COMPLETE] + Subtitles for season one!
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Date created
1-Jul-2022, 9:58 AM

I could do! I could move it later, so the conversation goes:
Obi-Wan: “I don’t understand.”
Daughter: “When you reach the altar, it will give you what you need.”
Qui-Gon: “Trust in the force.”
This way, it helps justify Obi-Wan essentially being given a useless response by Daughter, though it doesn’t solve the issue at hand.

That is true, though I didn’t necessarily feel like we needed more explanation at that point. I just felt like we needed some reason Obi-Wan goes along with the Daughter into this cave after she essentially kidnapped him. Yes, this episode can rely on dream logic, but I feel like it would be useful to have a line during that first shot of them walking up to the cave. Something to acknowledge the situation. Like I said, Obi-Wan could say, “What is this place?” or “Where are we?” And/or the Daughter could say, “Come with me” or some line about her brother. I felt that the Qui-Gon line would’ve worked during that shot as a way to reassure Obi-Wan. It could work in that place you suggested as well, but I feel like some kind of line would be nice to have in that first shot. I hope that makes sense.