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I’ve watched the first half and got interrupted, planning on watching the second half tomorrow. Overall I think you did a really good job condensing things down. Everything’s coherent, but there are times where I feel like the pacing is a little too breakneck, as if we’re just zooming through the plot without a moment to linger on anything. It’s something I’ve struggled with in my own edits as well. I’ll have more detailed thoughts after I finish the whole thing.