So, I read all your brilliant feedback and decided to do another crack at the rescue entry:
(I’ll do some more recomposing on Leia now - glad to hear it’s very close to fully working for most)
This is fantastic, it feels much less jarring, and the sense of movement imo helps sell Haja a bit better, since we don’t get the resolution to him considering betraying Obi-Wan with this cut. Spacing out the dialogue slightly through the establishing shots, like you’ve done here, mitigates the untrustworthiness in his delivery when Obi-Wan has him at blaster-point