Anjohan, the movement and lighting in the new scene are both great. The issue with the Leia in your last scene is she just pops up. You are having a reverse perspective problem. Obiwan starts larger and gets smaller as he moves away. Leia pops up small and gets a little larger. I would match her to a relevant spot on Obi’s back so perspective stays more consistent. Otherwise, I am really being sold that she is with him which vastly helps the scene.
Yeah, it would be possible to make she appear a bit earlier in the scene in Obi’s back, instead of later? Maybe it will be better. To me it also kinda gives the impression that she’s popping up in the scene.