I’ll be sincere, I prefer the NFBisms version of the opening. Personally, I don’t have a problem with the fact that the NFBisms’ version doesn’t has music, after all it’s just the first five minutes of the movie and it has the sole purpose to summarizes Obi-Wan’s routine. Besides that, the absence of music makes the scene more impactful and helps to start the film really strong (and NFBisms edited it in a really unique way that just works really well). But that’s just my two cents.
I second this…sorta. I don’t have a strong preference for NFBism’s version or anything. But I think, as brief intro, and somewhat of a recap, it’s allowed to be tonally inconsistent to an extent with the rest of the film. I just don’t think it’s that much of a problem, but since you went through the trouble of making an alternate version, well…I guess that’s fine, too.