I watched your edit and while I wanted to love it:
- There is glow everywhere that sometimes becomes distracting when it goes over the main content (thinking of deathstar hallway scenes.)
- Your Saturation is at an 11. I saw this article. https://fotographee.com/hdr-mistakes/
The points: Globally Saturated Color and Hyperdetailsm are big offenders here due to the high saturation and the high sharpening.