I really like this, including the music. That said, the pre-title part is incredibly short, as is the title itself. I’d consider putting the title after the entire video shown here, as well as providing a little bit longer establishing shots to start out and transitioning to the Lars farm stuff watching after the first set of flashbacks.
Post #1490827
- Author
- vranir
- Parent topic
- KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1490827/action/topic#1490827
- Date created
- 27-Jun-2022, 10:44 AM