I think you could keep the convo with Obi-Wan and Owen without having to keep his interaction with Reva. Did you like that as well? I just felt like it was a little convenient, and they were trying hard to make Reva look bad by cutting the woman’s hand off, but I could see why someone would want to keep all of that stuff as well.
I thought it was a nice little character moment for Owen, having to be brave in the face of being threatened. It also shows that the common people are supposed to hate Jedi and buy into the whole ideology to get by, which makes sense and drives home Palpatine’s rhetoric in ROTS. And I really like Obi Wan saying thank you and Owen saying “I didn’t do it for you.”
The specifics of Reva drawing her lightsaber on people and the inquisitors arguing with her about it, I could take or leave that stuff, but it’s a nice setup for the character interactions afterward.
The inquisitor’s speech about compassion being the Jedi’s weakness is great but it’s really insane that he’s telling the common people that, lol
“Our mutual sworn enemy is simply too good and we have to violently prey upon his kindness to you” is a very weird way to do your propaganda. But if it were just a voiceover on a scene showing the inquisitors on the move it could be neat.