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Post #1490685

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MandThUlti
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KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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Date created
26-Jun-2022, 9:42 PM

revel911 said:

Anjohan said:

^ That one cost money. Found one tho’ (thanks to you). This took me an agonizing 90 minutes. Here you go:

https://streamable.com/0zvxe2

-> Added some (fake) shadows as she walks
-> Added some (fake) light as she walks
-> and my favorite thing in life; rotoscoping (yeah, that was a joke)

My brain is too used to it now to evaluate the overall impression, but I’d say it works as long as I desaturate her a little bit more (she looks very red, but it’s mostly the compression - looks fine in HD) and you you don’t stare at it like it’s the center of attention (which we now do).

Come with ideas on how to possibly improve, if it does not work for any of you.

I like the idea a lot.

  • It’s pixelated … a lot around the edges
  • The lighting is a tad off. Should have harsher shadows and even though it is red, that green room lighting should be affecting it
  • I wonder if a small shadow on Obi would make her feel in the same space
  • When Obi reaches back to steal the key card, he would have punched her in the in the same physical space. What if she started from the left, and moved right afterwards?

I am being nitpicky (some of this could be as you said compression), but the idea helps sell the whole scene for me that he isn’t alone leading to the door opening scene.

I agree with this but the addition of her in the scene is a good one. Though it’s rough, I’m sure he can smooth it out. Like you said, perhaps she could be a little further to the left and scaled a little smaller as I think she may be a bit big.