- Prolonged Obi-Wan looking for the entrance with 1.5 seconds
-> Reshaped some of the new soundmix
-> Added a sewer pipe that Obi-Wan swims out of
-> Added bubbles as if he just jumped down into the pipe of which he then proceeds out of
-> Removed Haja’s “Call you in a bit” to see if it flows better - I have no preferance.
@jrs81 Just read your post before render, so I removed that just for you. I felt different about it - like it “sealed the deal” of him and Haja speaking, but perhaps more people agree with you. Tell me
Better. would also move “if it’s the sewers you want” to start while he is walking and end it during the alien fish. LEAD us into the next scene. The dialogue, OB1 Walking, and alien fish are all transition to the next scene which is OB1 swimming. The swell in music while Ob1 is swimming is also too good to cover up with dialogue.
My 2 cents. But you really did make this idea work. Impressed 👍
UPDATE:. I would start the line when he stops walking and stands there a moment to think. He would be recalling what Haja told him. If it’s the sewers you want (Obi on screen) there is only one place to go (entrance on screen) be safe (alien fish on screen) music swells…