So entrance (https://streamable.com/r4libo) and escape:
-> Added water in the background as to imply there is water both inside and outside (in the pipes surrounding the area), flowing, as if this was one of many exit points from the Imperial Sewer Location.
-> Added alarm SFX and color, to keep up with continuity that they are fleeing from the area
-> Tweaked some ambience
So the scene go something like:
Reeva contact Bounty Hunters / puts out bounty -> Obi-Wan sees they are being targeted -> They are on the run, Bounty Hunters are looking for him -> They run into alleyway, Obi-Wan slap the dude down -> Inquisitors arrive and confront Reeva -> Leia climbs up a ladder to the rooftoops, Obi-Wan is seen running up there already -> Inquisitor “Whispery-Voice” Guy marches through the streets -> Leia and Obi-Wan continues to run on the roof, and then Bounty Hunter starts to shoot -> and then some alterations to the overall pacing and tone of that scene. It doesn’t go on for way too long, and it focuses on Obi-Wan and Leia.
I really like this idea of Leia not running from Ben even though I had no problem with that plot point except for the slow chase. I might incorporate this into an edit im working on
Yeah, I think it helps a lot with the pace.
whoa … I have nothing to add expect I am so freaking excited. Your clips looks great.
Thank you, brother.