Really like this new rescue. Well done. Only critique to the new transition, is the “call you in a bit” scene immediately takes me out of it and kills the new flow. I would just cut that. Don’t need it.
Post #1490364
- Author
- jrs81
- Parent topic
- KENOBI: A STAR WARS STORY [The Radical "Help Me Obi-Wan Kenobi" Cut]
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- Date created
- 25-Jun-2022, 12:39 PM