This is something I put together in the other Kenobi redux thread, just in case it could be relevant to this project in some way:
My god, this is really professional quality, seems exactly like the beginning of a movie. Well done!
Anjohan, in regards to the new rescue clips, the main thing that threw me off was the immediate transition to underwater, are there any other shots you could use to bridge the gap? Even something as simple as Obi walking down an alley or something that could make it seem like he is accessing the sewers
Agreed. I also think that this rescue sequence is much better than the rescue from episode 2 by a mile, and for me at least all the clothes changes is excusable, since it isn’t a big deal after all and it’s for the benefit of better scenes. And this could be nitpicking, but Leia is smiling in the shot right before the lights turn off (maybe another shot of her when she’s panicking could be more appropriate). Additionally, an youtuber fixed an “error” of the moment where Obi-Wan hides from the stormtroopers, maybe this could help:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WsQzN0C21go
And jrs81 made an incredible color correction in his own edit of the show, his scenes of the final battle between Vader and Obi-Wan is much less dark, what I think helps A LOT to see clearer what is happening. Please consider doing something like this in your edit Anjohan!