I like most of these ideas, although your ideas for The Phantom Menace swing way too far back in the other direction for me. For ROTS, it’s worth pointing out that continuity with The Clone Wars pretty much requires the original “Plot to destroy the Jedi” scene at the war table. I got around this in my edit by including a heavily truncated version of the deleted scene that doesn’t repeat dialogue, and DominicCobb did something similar. I’d also want to see “I Am the Senate” make a return.