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Darth Sadifous
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The Book Of Boba Fett: Rewritten - A Fanfix
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19-Jun-2022, 11:52 AM

Darth Muffy said:

I’ve worked on the assasin fight scene some more removing a few frames from previous scenes in the fight, let me know what you think. 😎👍

This is a big improvement…Bravo! I watched the last two episodes. I think cutting the slapstick of the rat catcher droid definetly worked and rearranging the scenes to make Boba’s inflitration of the palace more stealthy was nice. The Sarlac pit scene still bothers me as Boba is clearly stripped of the armor out of it in the beginning of the series and would know we could not have survived if he lost the armor before escaping the pit. The scene is a bit to fan servicey to me and the action is a little silly. Perhaps there might be a way to portray he was too delirous to remember following his ascent from the pit. However, I know some people enjoy it. I would personally just cut it.

The last episode still has issues, mainly the freetown folk and mod bike gang making the finale unbelievable with how few die against an army of Pyke and two heavy armored/ shielded droids. I don’t know if there is anything you can really do about this beyond cutting down the time we see them running down the street in no cover and the amount of time the are behind that wall that apaprently can take unlimited damage. Maybe add some wilhelm screams of camera to convey more people perished.

I do love you made Boba more decisive and assertive. The new ending works for me a lot, accept for the fade in to the repurposed stinger from the Mando season two. I think that may need a little more time to breathe, it is a bit abrupt. Overall, good job…the series is still not perfect, but you made it more enjoyable to watch. Thanks for all the hard work!