As for the scoring: I am loving most everything up until the 10min mark, I feel bad being negative but minus a few choices for scoring Vader (when he slows her lightsaber) and the ani obi dual (which feels great) im not really feeling it, it kinda feels like two many scoring smushed into just a few minutes. The music is very hopeful when I feel like it should be somber and intense (obi giving his lightsaber). When Tala dies you have a rendition of Yoda’s theme which doesn’t really sit right with me. I think a tragic theme would work after she gets shot but before and directly after it should be quite (classic quite dread for audiences before something goes wrong). I think Vader should have an imperial march rendition while he walking, maybe a different one that is more menacing rather than…i guess military. Also for the small motif before obi gets on the ship, I think you can just play the VERY beginning, and it might fit better, the audience will recognize it, and you will get a beat before the next score (easier for blending and readying the audience for the next step).

I hope that makes sense. You are doing a great job so far! Keep up the great work.