I can’t wait to see it! ❤️
I would have liked to keep Shmi’s funeral and Yoda and Mace’s reaction to Anakin’s pain as in the original cut, but if it was impossible to keep them without creating bad video and audio transitions, then it doesn’t matter, I can do without them, although I think it’s a shame. Again, I thank you so much for doing this!

The fireside scene keeps a few more lines than what you suggested, though still removes mention of the kiss, because otherwise there’d be an unavoidable ugly audio transition with the music.

You did well to remove all the references to the Naboo kiss from that scene, because if you had kept them then it wouldn’t have made any sense. I mean, if the kiss on Geonosis is their first kiss, then any reference to the kiss on Naboo MUST be automatically deleted. So you did very well to remove those references from that scene.