I mean, I could attempt whatever order of scenes you like, but I can’t promise they’ll sound great.
Here’s the scenes in this part of the movie, so please arrange these in order:
- Obi-Wan arrives on Kamino, speaks to prime minister
- Lakeside kiss
- Padme visits her family (deleted scene)
- Obi-Wan tours the facility and sees the clone troopers
- Meadow picnic
- Obi-Wan questions Jango Fett
- Sunset dinner, leads right into fireplace scene
- Obi-Wan reports to the Council in the rain
In TAS, they go like this:
- Obi-Wan arrives on Kamino, speaks to prime minister
- Padme visits her family (deleted scene)
- Obi-Wan tours the facility and sees the clone troopers
- Meadow picnic
- Obi-Wan questions Jango Fett
- Sunset dinner, [replaced fireplace with lakeside kiss]
- Obi-Wan reports to the Council in the rain
As you can see, the only changes in TAS are to replace the lakeside kiss with Padme’s family, and then replace fireside scene with lakeside kiss. Shifting things around further than this would likely result in ugly scene transitions. Usually better to stick with the theatrical if it can be helped.