The sunset grading for that scene was meant to replace the fireplace scene. If you like that placement for the kiss scene, though, I could try to have it fade into that scene, though it would break it up. I’d recommend letting me place it earlier, either where it was to begin with or swapped with the meadow sequence.

The scene of the kiss is set during sunset, but the scene in front of the fireplace is set when the sun has already set. So there is no inconsistency. Padmé interrupts their kiss because she thinks she’s wrong and thinks it’s not right to be carried away by her emotions, after which in the scene in front of the fireplace she consistently explains her reasons, and she explains why she thinks that engaging in a relationship with Anakin is not possible. But then in the Geonosis arena she lets herself go, openly recognizes her feelings and kisses him, again. So the sequence of events is fine as it is in your fan edit, you just have to add the scene in front of the fireplace, making the dialogue smoother, and add the interruption of the kiss. After the interruption of the kiss we jump and see Obi-Wan on Kamino, after which we return to Naboo with the scene in front of the fireplace. Then we return on Kamino, etc.

And I can export it as ProRes, if that works. Or mp4.

Its fine for me! ❤️