Well, I don’t think the Imperial March really fits, there is other music that fits better.
The Song Battle of Hoth
Imperial Starfleet Deployed & City In The Clouds
Betrayal at Bespin
The Imperial Probe & Aboard The Executor
Emperor Arrives
Nute and Rune confer with Darth SidiousI would even skip the Obi vs. Vader fight entirely, up to where Vader jerkily turns his head.
Cut inquisitors extremely, except for Reva, she is unfortunately a leading role.
The helmet on the jaw chin does not fit.
All Obi-wan should know is that vader is a machine, a diabolical machine.
Good ideas, I think you just have to wait for the series to finish, then use what’s useful.
Oh, one more thing, Bail should only report on the radio, Obi wan’s cave should remain secret
Good tips, and agree with all your statements except the one with Bail in the cave;
His dialogue there is profound, and some of the things he says are really heartfelt. I HATE that it had to be said in the cave instead of on the holocommunicator, but these writers are unfortunately all over the place, and I can’t see any way to edit around it as of right now. I don’t want it to feel like a fan edit even though it is one, and as of right now I see no plausible way to keep the dialogue without the scene.