I’ve read all your different interpretations of the episode, and here are my few cents;
- We see Anakin being re-assembled into Vader, and do not see him again before the village. This helps build the “The Monster is really alive” feel they go for when he starts provoking a response from Obi-Wan, killing villagers.
- The Imperial March (perhaps a very dark, slowed-down version) HAS to play when we see him. What is up with this score??? It’s pathetic!
- Tone down the Inquisitors - again. It is so cringe-worthy I just hope there is some good material for them in the upcoming episodes, so that we don’t have to cut them down to the bare bones.
- Do some editing tweaks in the “duel” between Obi-Wan and Anakin. This is obvious just meant as an appetizer, but the pacing is off at some places. It should be something like “VADER SHOWS HIMSELF” -> “OBI-WAN IGNITES, DECIDES TO FLEE” -> ANAKIN ATTACKS, THREE-FOUR SECONDS OF SABER FIGHTING -> “BURNING OBI-WAN IN FLAMES” -> “OBI-WAN BEING SAVED”.
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