Anjohan, if I make make another suggestion to consider, I was also put off a bit by how Obi-wan was acting so depressed that he couldn’t even help Leia if he wanted to. Saying he’s “not that man anymore” type of thing, and then utterly rejecting Bail’s first offer to help her. […]
I agree here. I will wait and assess for more content to get a better understanding of OBI-WAN’s state of mind in this series, but I think I will tone it down just a tad. I found the upright decline a bit confusing.
Softened Leia Introduction
Leia Kidnapping:
The Leia kidnapping is great. Really better than the actual scene.
Thank you, Sirius. I might alter it a little upon a release, but yea - it works.