I really like the change to the Inquisitor scene on Tatooine Anjohan. Toning down 3rd Sister helps her character a lot here. I think a lot of the recommended changes are spot on, and currently torn on the Anakin reveal one. I’ll have to see how the dialogue around this plays out throughout the next few episodes before I can take a stance on it.
If you take out the logos intros, recaps, and the 6+ minute credits, these episodes are actually quite short and I am fairly certain you should be able to cut this into a single good film when it’s all said and done.