Definitely feel like you shouldn’t keep the 180 break in. It also looks weird to jump cut from Kylo looking back to him looking straight. You would have to reverse the footage to have him turn back around or something.
And yeah, “escape” trailing off is definitely a problem too.
Post #1485068
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- RogueLeader
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- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- 19-May-2022, 6:44 PM