Hal, I noticed in your workprint that you didn’t cut Palpatine’s line “She’s not who you think she is” and Kylo’s response “Who is she?”. I think this exchange doesn’t really have much payoff in the Rey nobody version and I would cut the lines as in Spence’s edit.

I also really liked how DominicCobb’s workprint shows a quick flash of Rey on the Sith throne in the hangar scene after Kylo reveals her destiny. It gives the scene some extra punch which I think helps with the “reveal” being less significant. Would you consider adopting this in your Rey nobody version?