This is nitpicky, but it also seems like the officer is at the end of a sentence right before the camera pans down off of his face. It makes me wonder if a line like, “General, the Senate has just voted/responded…” his face goes off-camera. “They’re launching their fleet within the hour.”
Anyway I think it works as-is too. Feel bad for making you and Eddie go back and forth re-recording lines.
Post #1484042
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- RogueLeader
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- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- 12-May-2022, 1:48 PM