Thanks, and I agree. This is probably the single most important part of this edit for the greater story and trilogy.
BTW, I just updated the link above. I realized that there was an establishing shot of the Starkiller prisons that I had cut from the first version which would help the flow of this scene.
I’m not sure what to put for that final line.
“And General, if the advance team is destroyed…nobody at all could save us.”
Or
“And General, unless that shield is destroyed…nobody can save us.”
“And General, until that shield is destroyed…not even the Force can help us.”
I like the second line.