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Post #1483871

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Grand Admiral Thrawn
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The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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Date created
11-May-2022, 4:51 PM

NeverarGreat said:

Good one! However, I’m constrained by the mouth movements to put the word ‘destroyed’ at the end of the phrase, so perhaps:

“And General, without that shield destroyed…nobody can save us.”

What about “And General,” only reason I didn’t have that was because it was repetitive. Also lets the scene breathe a little between C-3PO’s line.