I like using that shot of Leia and everyone’s reactions to her being unwell.
I was wondering if you’d be up for rewording the crawl a bit to make it clearer that she’s unwell because of the attack on her in TLJ?
Maybe something like “General Leia Organa, weakened and ailing after her near-death experience, guides Rey in her quest to become a true Jedi Knight.”
Just throwing it out there.