Looks good to me! You did a good job of matching font, size, and placement. There did seem to be some interlacing with the wipe you used, but better that it appear in the credits than the film itself. Based on the clip's aspect ratio, I'm guessing your set isn't anamorphic? Of course, that doesn't make me want it less, I just want to set up my player correctly.

ETA: On repeated viewings, the "B" and "J" seem to look a little different (i.e. a little blue-green) than the rest of the text, but that might be the fact that it's at a lower quality than the final.