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Post #1482610

Author
vranir
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Community Focus Thread 1: The Phantom Menace
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Date created
3-May-2022, 10:16 AM

I like it, especially the thread about the ambassadors and some of the new JarJar lines, but the following still stand out to me as (unavoidable?) issues:

  • The number of quick scenes make it feel a bit choppy.

  • How did the Jedi get to the planet? Why are they in the woods?

  • Do we have to tip our hand w Sideous so early? I’d ideally like to see Dooku instructing them, setting up the overall Separatist threat, then reveal that he’s secretly taking orders from elsewhere in Ep2.