Good points Sherlock! I made a few small edits to your take:

The galaxy is in crisis.
Luke Skywalker, working
to restore the legendary
Jedi Order, has vanished.

In the ensuing chaos,
Imperial sympathizers
have begun rising in power.
Declaring the New Republic
to be broken and inept,
they demand a return
to the Empire under the
guise of the FIRST ORDER.

While the Senate stalls,
a few determined members
secretly form a daring
RESISTANCE to the threat.
Believing that Luke can
end the Imperial threat
once and for all, they
pursue a lead to the
Last Jedi’s whereabouts…