I do! It’s a good reminder not to lose sight of the basics like the First Order’s villainy. Though I wonder if there could be a way to work in their menace without having them outright attack the Republic, as well as offering this peace. In the film Poe looks astonished at the hangar which could mean that they are so reclusive that almost nobody in the Republic knows about them.
I will think on this further.
How about this?
Episode VII
THE FORCE AWAKENS
Luke Skywalker has vanished!
In his absence, the peaceful
New Republic is afraid,
countless threats have been
made by a mysterious
Imperial remnant known as
the FIRST ORDER.
In a surprising move, these
sinister agents have promised
to end the conflict on
the condition that the
Jedi Order is finally
declared extinct.
General Leia Organa, skeptical
of this offering, has secretly
organized a RESISTANCE to
investigate this threat, and
to find her brother amidst
the darking stars…