If you can’t tell, I love writing Star Wars crawls. I made a few adjustments to yours:
It is a time of despair.
Luke Skywalker, striving
to restore the legendary
Jedi Knights, has vanished.
In his absence, malevolent forces,
raised on a hidden Imperial fortress,
have established the sinister
FIRST ORDER, terrorizing star systems
throughout the peaceful New Republic.
With the New Republic falling into
endless chaos and division, a
few brave senators have secretly
called upon a daring RESISTANCE to
find the last Jedi, and restore peace
to the darkening stars…