I really like this crawl! I think one could go back and forth on certain word choices but I think it could work well as-is. The general structure is perfect.
Post #1481845
- Author
- RogueLeader
- Parent topic
- The Force Awakens: Starlight (V1.1 Released!)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1481845/action/topic#1481845
- Date created
- 28-Apr-2022, 12:37 AM