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Post #148031

Author
Commander Courage
Parent topic
The Skywalker Legacy (working title) (* unfinished project *)
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Date created
15-Oct-2005, 1:33 PM
It occurs to me you could just plug in the space battle during Obi-Wan's tale to Luke in his house. For example:
"Yes, I was once a Jedi Knight the same as your father."
Fade to RotS space battle.
"I wish I'd known him."
"He was the best starpilot in the galaxy."
Anakin doing incredible maneuvers.
They get to the Invisible Hand.
"And a cunning warrior."
Anakin and Obi-Wan destroy battle droids.
"And he was a good friend."
"I sense ___ (have to replace Dooku w/something)." "And I sense a trap." "Next move?" "Spring the trap."
Fade back to present.
"Which reminds me..."

I don't know if that's how you planned on doing the flashbacks, but I think a narration of sorts would make them flow very well, especially in this instance and during Obi-Wan and Luke's talk in RotJ.