That works really well although I like RL ending the scene with “I have you now,” otherwise it feels a bit abrupt like oh okay we’re done now.
I actually stole that and added it in since I rendered this lol
Haha, that makes me happy. The first time I edited the scene, I also cut his line, “So that’s where you are” because I think it works better with him realizing in silence where she is, and it makes “I have you now” hit harder. Both ways work fine though.