That works really well although I like RL ending the scene with “I have you now,” otherwise it feels a bit abrupt like oh okay we’re done now.
Post #1478687
- Author
- DominicCobb
- Parent topic
- REY NOBODY - A Collaborative Thread
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1478687/action/topic#1478687
- Date created
- 5-Apr-2022, 2:50 PM