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Post #1475766

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sirlegion13
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Community Focus Thread 1: The Phantom Menace
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Date created
13-Mar-2022, 5:52 PM

EddieDean said:

Here’s a little thing.
I think it’s a little too fan-edity though, because Anakin doesn’t really react.

First of all, hell yeah!

I think you can solve both issues (fan-edify-ness and the lack of Anakin’s reaction) by moving the start/stop later. Have Jinn begin speaking (your final test…) while Anakin is flipping buttons -> cut to him meditating-> “trust in the force…”

I feel it would be more visually appealing to see that it’s him talking to Anakin as opposed to just hearing it (which I think would help mask the edit-nature) and allows for Anakin to react offscreen since we’re looking back at Jinn anyways.